# Noticing narrative distance

A description can reveal both a place and the position from which somebody sees it. Reading for that distance adds precision without requiring you to distrust every narrator.

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## Listen for the judgment inside description

Distinguish a description’s basic information from the evaluation carried by its phrasing. A detail may establish an occupation, while the attention paid to it suggests pride, irritation or uncertainty. Those possibilities need support from the actual passage; they should not be attached automatically to a character’s job or circumstances. Ask what the narration makes prominent and whether another observer might arrange the same information differently.

## Separate access from completeness

Vincent’s working surroundings in The Mycelial Invasion and William Nagy’s opening circumstances in World Engine provide different routes into a larger situation. Familiarity with one person’s experience can make a setting feel well understood before its wider relations are clear. In The Director, attention to people around a creative project offers another opportunity to notice selective emphasis. Access to a viewpoint is valuable without being a promise of complete knowledge.

## Describe the distance you can support

Instead of declaring a narrator reliable or unreliable at once, formulate a smaller claim: this description gives more attention to one concern than another. Explain your reason in original words. You can then ask whether the emphasis changes as you continue. In a first-reader conversation, keep examples within the agreed stopping point. This approach allows trust, sympathy and uncertainty to coexist without announcing a revelation or assigning a final judgment.

## Questions for your reading

- What part of a description supplies information, and what part invites evaluation?
- Which concern receives the most attention from the viewpoint you are following?

## Source books

- [The Mycelial Invasion](https://paulhaedo.com/books/the-mycelial-invasion/)
- [World Engine](https://paulhaedo.com/books/world-engine/)
- [The Director](https://paulhaedo.com/books/the-director/)

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